By
Suzan St Maur
1. Make the effort to learn about the etiquette (these days
known as "netiquette") involved in writing emails. There are loads of good
reference websites and books about the internet which will tell you the basics.
I know it might seem a bit precious to attach so much importance to social
niceties when the internet is basically very informal. However, whether we like
it or not many people do take online etiquette very seriously. So if you're
writing emails for business, you should assume that your recipient may well be
one of those...
2. Never send and preferably don't even try to write an email if
you're angry, upset, drunk, or otherwise not in total control. If you
have a heated conversation with someone on the telephone you can sometimes fudge
things over. But with emails, once you hit "send" whatever you've written is
there, carved in tablets of stone, for as long as the recipient wants to glare
at it. The old adage about "counting to ten" before responding couldn't be more
true here. Only send angry emails if you can handle, or really don't care about,
the recipient's resultant feelings!
3. One thing that you may not think of is that it can be useful to
consider carefully the time you send your emails. To begin with it's
always a good idea to avoid sending emails that coincide with the Monday morning
rush and Friday afternoon lethargy. In addition, I've occasionally found that
emails sent to companies over the weekend end up getting lost in cyberspace. And
on a rather more subtle level, if your recipients see that you're sending emails
on a Sunday morning or late at night, they may feel they can interrupt you for a
business talk at the same times. Although you may think it's cool to impress a
client that you work all hours, your partner won't when the same client calls
you on the phone at midnight.
4. Because almost everyone at some time or another has been infected with a
computer virus, people are understandably wary of attachments.
I never send attachments to anyone I don't know very well, and equally never
open attachments unless they're from people I know well. And then, some
contemporary viruses and worms clone themselves on to genuine email names and
addresses, so even an email purporting to be from someone you know might just be
infected. When in doubt append text to the body of your email message, or
contact the recipient beforehand and make sure they're happy to receive it as an
attachment.
5. Layout of emails is something few people pay attention to, especially if
(like me) their system uses text only. However even with simple text a
sensible layout can make the whole thing more readable. Above all, you
should avoid writing emails that sprawl all the way across the screen. Those are
very hard to read and to be able to see everything properly as text, your reader
may have to fiddle about changing fonts. The safest format to use consists of
lines no more than 65 characters long. That fits, works everywhere and makes the
email much easier on the eye.
6. Your subject line should focus on what's in it for the reader
so it grabs their attention. You'll find that the best way to do that is to
include some sort of benefit. For example, if you're writing an email about a
downwardly-revised project budget, instead of saying "Project X -- revised
costs" say "Project X -- costs reduced by XX%"). If there isn't a genuine
benefit to use, try to make it interesting and intriguing anyway. Also, avoid
the words most hated by spam filters like "free," "subscribe," etc.
7. Online writing has to be kept concise and clear, largely because the
screen is a particularly unfriendly reading medium for most people's eyes. If
only for that reason the KISS principle (Keep It Short & Simple) is useful. With
emails you need to get straight to the point and keep to it.
Someone who receives dozens of emails per day doesn't have time to wade through
a lot of preamble. By making your point concisely you'll stand the greatest
possible chance of avoiding the undignified fate of being deleted.
8. As far as writing style is concerned, here more than with any other medium
it's very, very helpful to write as people speak. In addition,
it will make your email clearer and more concise if you leave out all but
essential adjectives and adverbs. Keep your sentences short, and only ever
include one main idea or thought per sentence. Paragraphs shouldn't consist of
more than 6 sentences max -- fewer if possible. And if you list more than a
couple of items, use bullet points.
9. If you write emails for business, make good use of the signature
facility that goes after your name. It's surprising just how many
people fail to use that facility properly - yet it's an excellent opportunity
for you to put across a few words of promotion. Because the email signature
appears at the end, your recipients are not likely to be irritated by it. In
fact provided that it contains useful contact information it will be seen as a
helpful addition to your message. And even if your email is text only you can
still make it look reasonably smart.
Canadian-born Suzan St Maur is an international business writer and author
based in the United Kingdom. In addition to her consultancy work for clients in
Europe, the USA, Canada and Australia, she contributes articles to more than 150
business websites and publications worldwide, and has written twelve published
books on business writing, marketing, publishing and humor. Check out all her
current books
here.
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